This is so, so, so good. Dark and depressing and hard-to-breathe stifling, Jensen's constant feeling as though he's being trapped and suffocated, first by his life pre-Jared, then by the web Jared draws him in is palpable with every carefully chosen word, as is the frantic feeling of struggling-but-not-quite. You ended at just the right place too, and I'm really bowled over by this fic. Good horror is hard to come by, and I'm so glad to have found this fic because it's really, really good. Loved it!
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Date: 2010-03-12 05:16 pm (UTC)