My God, that was amazing! It was dark and horrifying and at the same time, written so gorgeously it made my stomach hurt a little bit, and I couldn't stop reading. Like every line was essential and perfect, especially after Jensen met Jeremy and his world turned on end.

Your ending was unexpected (though inevitable) and flawless! Leaving it at the perfect place for our minds to wander off and just imagine what'll come next for both of them. Now, I think I need to go read it again. Bravo!